Monday, August 13, 2012

What If? The Fairy Tale Madness Blogfest

First off, a huge thanks to Leigh Covington, Cassie Mae, Mark Koopmans, and Morgan Shamy for hosting this blogfest. How stinkin' fun is this? :) They're celebrating their respective blogiversaries this week, so let's give them some love!
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"What If?" The Fairy Tale Madness Blogfest

 Rules: 
  • Think of your favorite "well known" fairytale and ask "What If…!"
  • Pick one of these four categories: 
    Best Plot Twist, Best Love Story,  Best Tragedy , Best Comic Relief
  • Write a scene/flash fiction illustrating a new detail of the fabled fairy tale that changes our perspective.
    • Keep it PG-13
    • Post your story between August 13th and 17th. 
    • 300 word maximum.  
  Details: 
  • Fairy tale: Little Red Riding Hood
  • Setting: Modern/urban
  • Team: Tragedy
  • Twist: Ending
  • Word count: 300 exactly
 Scene: 

“You be careful, Red,” my dad warned from the doorway, smoke edging out around his words. “Did you take that pepper spray with ya?”

I jogged down the steps to the sidewalk. “Yes, Dad.”

“And you got them cookies for Nana?”

My boots splashed an inky puddle, scattering the streetlights. “Right here.” I held up the wicker basket as proof. Honestly, did he not get that I turned eighteen last week? I could handle a freakin’ errand down the street.

He grunted. “Just straight there and back, okay? None of your shortcuts.”

“Got it,” I said, tossing a wave over my shoulder. “I’ll be right back. I promise.”

“And don’t talk to nobody,” he yelled at my back.

“Yeah, yeah.” Geez. Watching the news made him paranoid. So there’d been a few  abductions last month. It wasn’t like they were close.

I pulled up my hood against the wind and ducked around the corner. Nana lived a few blocks away and unless I wanted to freeze my ass off, I’d have to take an unapproved detour.

“Excuse me,” a man called from a few feet back. “Miss?”

Shit. Was he talking to me? I took a few steps, and then burst into a jog when I heard his footsteps quicken behind me.

“Wait!”

My heart hammered in my chest as we plunged into the alley’s darkness, and I patted my jacket for the pepper spray. Was this seriously happening? Now?

“—dropped this,” he yelled.

Right.

When we reached the end, I bolted past two parked cars and into the street. If I could just make if to the other side...

I threw a glance back and froze. The man was bent over, gasping for breath and clutching the bow from Nana’s basket. Oh.

Too bad I missed the headlights.

 
 
Have a great week, guys! ♥

87 comments:

  1. Great story! But poor little Red :(

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    1. Thanks, Kyra! :)

      Oh, I know! What's with me and flash fiction? It always ends up so much darker than my normal writing...

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    1. Hah! I almost spit out my water. ;) Thanks, Alex!

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  3. Typical teenage. A few abductions last month--no big deal. They think they'll live forever. Maybe not!

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    1. Ah, to be young and invincible… ;) Thanks for stopping by, Suzi!

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  4. Bwhahaha! I love it! Great twist at the end there, and seriously, that would so be me. I'd bolt if a guy started running up behind me. Yikes! Lol.

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    1. Thanks, Cassiopeia! :) Oh, me too. I'd be all, "STRANGER DANGER! AHH!"

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  5. How sad! You always trust the handsome stranger, poor girl ;)

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    1. I felt like I was betraying my romantic roots with this one. They should've had a HEA! ;)

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  6. LOL! Carrie, I could read your writing any time... I love it. It's so smooth and creates the right images. AWESOME... ;D

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    1. Aww, Morgan. You always make my day. <3 Thank you!

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  7. haha, this was fun. I like it! What if Cinderella got changed back into a donkey and when the Prince found her, the shoe actually fit her hoof??? I know, I'm just so creatively adaptable!

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    1. Hah! I love it. You would've dominated this blogfest, Joylene. ;)

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  8. ROFL - I love Alex's 'splat.' xD
    Great flash fiction, Carrie. Loved it! :D

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    1. I did, too! You should've seen me cracking up about it, and then feeling bad... *grins* Thank you!

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  9. Snap! Deliciously wicked end, and the video was a nice touch (listening as I write.) Thanks for the shudder. :P

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    1. Thanks, D.D.! I love that song, and it felt creepy enough to fit the scene. :D

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  10. You would make little read NEW ADULT! I am seriously laughing my butt off right now. She's so snarky I loves ;)

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    1. You know I'm all about NA right now! ;) Thanks, Victoria!

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  11. How much fun was that? I loved it, Carrie.

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  12. She should've listened to her daddy. Teenagers! Very cute, Carrie. Wish I had the brail for this one.

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    1. Indeed. I guess hindsight really is 20/20. *Sigh* Poor Red...

      Thank you, Nancy! :)

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  13. Love your tragic take on this! "Pepper spray" HA!

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  14. Well done! Tragic too. Thanks for the clever twist.

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  15. Yay for Team Tragedy!
    This is brilliant writing Carrie! Love this story. Poor Red. I think I would have ran too though. :(

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    1. Go Team Tragedy! :)

      Thank you, Leigh! I appreciate that. Unfortunately, I probably would've, too... :(

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    1. Ouch, indeed! I felt kind of sick ending it that way. :/

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  17. I love the twist of the ending. I was all worried for her and the man who followed her but then bam! the ending.

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    1. Thank you, Clarissa! That makes my day. :)

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  18. what a fun meme! and i guess strangers in cars as as dangerous as those on foot ;)

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    1. Heck yeah! Gotta watch out for everyone. ;) Thanks for stopping by, Gina!

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  19. Hah hah . .. that was AWESOME!!!!

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  20. Great modern retelling of a classic! Hopefully, she awakes in a hospital bed some time later. Tragedy strikes again! Beautifully written. :)

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    1. Thank you, Michael! I appreciate the kind words.

      Oo, yes. I'll probably sleep better if we assume she wakes up in a hospital. ;)

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  21. Oooh. Now she's sleeping beauty, right?
    ;)

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  22. Love it, Carrie! I always enjoy retelling of classics.

    Happy blogiversary to everyone!

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    1. Thank you, Talli! It was an interesting prompt to play around with. :)

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  23. :( Sad. Awesome twist, though. Nice job.

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  24. Blogger doesn't like me today...comment, take two. :)
    Heh heh, nice one. I don't even want to know what gave you the idea for this, but now I must check out the others.

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    1. Thanks for taking the time to comment again, Dana! :) Oo, you should. It was a fun prompt!

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  25. Ouch! Didn't see that one coming!
    It gives a new meaning to "red" in Red Riding Hood...

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    1. Oo, that's true (in a sick, twisted kind of way)! ;)

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  26. NICE!!!

    Little Squished Riding Hood... great job in updating such a classic story and what a tragic end... I blame the dad for being all paronoid :)

    Thanks for participating :)

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    1. The compassion of writers knows no bounds... *grins*

      Thank you, Mark!! :D

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  27. So are we assuming she's dead because it's a tragedy...?

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    1. I left it open for interpretation. Getting hit by a car is pretty disastrous, either way. Eek!

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  28. LOL, I laughed so hard when I saw that last line. Great job!

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    1. I think you're of the Alex mindset, Jaycee. "Splat!" ;) Thank you!

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  29. Uh oh, I guess cars can be trickier than wolves sometimes. :)

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    1. Indeed! The moral of this fairy tale is: Don't run out in traffic. ;)

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  30. hahahaa when I was younger my dad always presented me with pepper spray when I moved to a new city/went to college

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    1. I had pepper spray for going off to college/moving to a new city, too! I was always afraid of spraying myself in the face, though... LOL

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  31. Nice voice! Love it and the spin :) I picked Red Riding Hood as well :)

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    1. Thanks, Hope! :) I'm off to read yours now.

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  32. All these fairytale mix ups are making me wonder when Once Upon a Time is going to come back on TV.

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  33. Hi, Carrie,

    What an interesting turn of events. My heart was pounding right along with Red's.

    I chose RRH also. But, alas, my is VERY different.Talk about a twist. LOL. Hope you'll drop by to read it. You'll have a good laugh.

    Mark and Morgan dropped their jaws unexpectedly. Lol.

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    1. Thank you, Michael! I'm happy to hear that.

      I'm hurrying over to your blog now. I want to read this jaw-dropping twist! ;)

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  34. Oh wow! That was really intense!!

    My dad gave me pepper spray when I went off to school. Such a dad thing to do :P

    Samantha
    Writing Through College

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    1. Thank you, Samantha!

      Heck yeah. Gotta look out for their girls! :)

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  35. LOL! Oh no she'll definitely be red now and squished. Great twist on the tale.

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    1. I love how delightfully twisted you guys are. Everyone is commenting on the red thing! LOL Thanks, Madeleine!

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  36. Such a thing as being too paranoid, maybe? I felt the tension in this. I like how you leave it up to the reader as to whether this is her demise...

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  37. shoulda listened to her preachin papa...
    great tragic twist for so few words!

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